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My dream
My love
My soul


"Đông biên nhật xuất tây biên vũ, đạo thị vô t́nh khước hữu t́nh"

Tô Ḱ Ki yên lặng thả lỏng nắm tay, lúc này mới cảm thấy mồ hôi lạnh đầy tay. Hắn đang muốn đứng dậy, trong đầu lại thoảng qua khuôn mặt của Hoan Hoan, trong ḷng một trận buồn đau, lảo đảo té ngă trên mặt đất.

Hắn cứu Niếp gia Phượng Thành, thành toàn bằng hữu chi nghĩa, khả hắn thân thủ giết con ruột của ḿnh. . . . . .

Tự tay giết con, tự ḿnh giam trảm bằng hữu, lại thất tiết vu hoàng đế đổi lấy một nhà tánh mạng. Từ nay về sau, không c̣n cái kia khí phẩm cao thượng mĩ ngọc thị lang Tô Ḱ Ki , hắn chỉ là một người dơ bẩn tà ác, dưới nền đất đê tiện đích thú loại. . . . . .

Hai tấn đầu xanh lấm tấm bạc trong một đêm, đau ḷng đắc như vậy cũng không có thể chết. Niếp gia Phượng Thành là trách nhiệm của hắn, hắn phải nuôi lớn đứa nhỏ đó...

"Phượng Thành, từ nay về sau, ngươi là con ta. Ngươi là. . . . . . Tô Tích Hoan."

《应帝王》- Ứng đế vương - Thương Lẫm
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Critique by Lynneblue Jan 5, 2011, 7:18:27 AM
Damn that's so incredibly beautiful! :heart:

At heart, it's important that I mention this creation of yours is truthfully heart-stopping. The scheme you have executed is nicely awesome. It is understandable to me that you did the best you could with your uncut capacity of skills. The colour of this art piece is decisevely exact for the message that I see you are struggling to create, but now that I think about it this comment is probably pointless. Despite that, I see that your use of foreground could of been improved upon as I see that it can't duplicate the capability found in the whole of the art piece. To finish I would like to illuminate that it has been a joy to jot down this exposition for you and I think it will empower you to improve your creation.
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This is a beautiful piece, the pale, simple colours adding wonderfully to the overall effect. The dark of the clothes contrasts nicely against the other paled hues, and the background is simple but not boring.
It took me a few looks to see the damaged eyes, however, and I feel that as it is what makes the piece so inspired it should be more noticable. Perhaps a more contrasting red would help it stand out? Subtle is good, but not to the point of unnoticability.
I love the expression on their face, and the pose with the risen hand is thought-provoking and elegant.
Overall this piece is very beautiful and well made. Excellent!
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Purinru Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
what program do you use? :)
Wlotus-2307 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014
I used Paint tool SAI ^^
Crazywith80s Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww he's soo beautiful :iconheartbeatplz:
Wlotus-2307 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012
Sorry for the late reply, and thank you so much :iconasdfghplz:
Crazywith80s Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awww, no prob ^^ ^^
yaoistaloca2 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012
que chulo
theonlybriman47 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
lovin the colors, awesome work
Wlotus-2307 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2011
Thank you >w<
oscar-ojisan Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2011   Artist
you are very good >_<
kelly105 Featured By Owner May 13, 2011  Student Photographer
amazing :)
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