My dream My love My soul Disappearing... _____________________
"Đông biên nhật xuất tây biên vũ, đạo thị vô t́nh khước hữu t́nh" Tô Ḱ Ki yên lặng thả lỏng nắm tay, lúc này mới cảm thấy mồ hôi lạnh đầy tay. Hắn đang muốn đứng dậy, trong đầu lại thoảng qua khuôn mặt của Hoan Hoan, trong ḷng một trận buồn đau, lảo đảo té ngă trên mặt đất.
Hắn cứu Niếp gia Phượng Thành, thành toàn bằng hữu chi nghĩa, khả hắn thân thủ giết con ruột của ḿnh. . . . . .
Tự tay giết con, tự ḿnh giam trảm bằng hữu, lại thất tiết vu hoàng đế đổi lấy một nhà tánh mạng. Từ nay về sau, không c̣n cái kia khí phẩm cao thượng mĩ ngọc thị lang Tô Ḱ Ki , hắn chỉ là một người dơ bẩn tà ác, dưới nền đất đê tiện đích thú loại. . . . . .
Hai tấn đầu xanh lấm tấm bạc trong một đêm, đau ḷng đắc như vậy cũng không có thể chết. Niếp gia Phượng Thành là trách nhiệm của hắn, hắn phải nuôi lớn đứa nhỏ đó...
"Phượng Thành, từ nay về sau, ngươi là con ta. Ngươi là. . . . . . Tô Tích Hoan."
This picture is beautiful. I looked at it thoroughly and, all in all, it is a wonderful piece.
I especially like the combination of both light and dark shapes in the background. This adds to the full shape of the character in the foreground. The clothing on this character is absolutely gorgeous.
The only think I could think to add about your style is to make it "pop" a little more. When at first glance, nothing really attracts the eye. The colors are nice, but at least one color needs to bring the eye to a focal point to make it "pop" more. This creates a good overall sense of the picture.
This is a beautiful piece, the pale, simple colours adding wonderfully to the overall effect. The dark of the clothes contrasts nicely against the other paled hues, and the background is simple but not boring. It took me a few looks to see the damaged eyes, however, and I feel that as it is what makes the piece so inspired it should be more noticable. Perhaps a more contrasting red would help it stand out? Subtle is good, but not to the point of unnoticability. I love the expression on their face, and the pose with the risen hand is thought-provoking and elegant. Overall this piece is very beautiful and well made. Excellent!
I especially like the combination of both light and dark shapes in the background. This adds to the full shape of the character in the foreground. The clothing on this character is absolutely gorgeous.
The only think I could think to add about your style is to make it "pop" a little more. When at first glance, nothing really attracts the eye. The colors are nice, but at least one color needs to bring the eye to a focal point to make it "pop" more. This creates a good overall sense of the picture.
It took me a few looks to see the damaged eyes, however, and I feel that as it is what makes the piece so inspired it should be more noticable. Perhaps a more contrasting red would help it stand out? Subtle is good, but not to the point of unnoticability.
I love the expression on their face, and the pose with the risen hand is thought-provoking and elegant.
Overall this piece is very beautiful and well made. Excellent!
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